Chicken Writing

Big Guys writing

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W.A.L.T. - retell stories in our own words.

• Organise our writing with clear beginning, middle and end.

• Use google apps for online writing

In Townsville there was a big bully named Sean. He was big,  bigger then a big fat hippo and he was  strong, stronger then a bull. He was a big fat, horrible bully. One day he was at school and saw a bus, he walked up to the bus he shook it up and down and the four kids tumbled out. Sean picked one of the kids up called Geoff lone he said “ did you bring lunch for me today Geoff!” “You can have my chicken nuggets” Geoff said nervously.

Thump thump thump “hi I'm big Steve I'm new here” do I smell chicken nuggets “I  want your chicken nuggets, big Steve said Big Steve wants the chicken nuggets!!! Sean ate the whole lunch box  then when there were no more chicken nuggets big steve pored pink paint on Sean he was very angry.

Then the normal size kids were fed up with one big kid bossing them for too long they  were not going to stand another big kid bossing them around. So they looked up inflatable chicken nuggets then one of the kids pulled out a phone and called up the inflatable chicken nuggets store and asked them to deliver it to Solsberry school immediately!!

The truck turned up and the 4 kids carried the box over to  Sean and big Steve. After they gobbled the inflatable chicken nuggets they started growing and growing. The normal size kids said “it's volleyball time” the kids boosted the big kids up into the air the big kids floated away into space they were fighting about why this happened.

Big Steve said “this is all your fault.”  “Well you poured pink paint on me” said Sean “if you had given me those chicken nuggets they wouldn’t of blown us up ” Big Steve said. Sean said if we float over to the satellite we could pop so they floated towards the satellite pop! “ahh” said Sean and big Steve. Then they drifted down to the ground  and went normal size again, everyone said yay! Then one of the kids said do want to play lazer force with us Big steve shuddered aa year. So Townsville was back to normal until big Stewart came an even bigger, bigger kid came!!

writing goals

Goal -  use poetic language.

Reason - I chose this goal because my sentences don’t make me proud. I want to make my sentences exciting.

Handwriting Goals

W.A.L.T. - Complete a piece of handwriting displaying my best work.

Set  learning goals to improve my handwriting.

What I did well? -  Spaced letters and words appropriately and consistently. Sit my letters on the line.

What are my next steps? - Slope letters  consistently and neatly off on the line.

Reflection on our calf and lamb day work

W.A.L.T. - Reflect on our lamb and calf day work.

What I did - This year I made a rock art owl. First we had to choose our rock and we had to get Mrs Fergus to paint the rocks white. Then I had to find a picture of a owl and draw it onto my rock.The next day we coloured our rocks in with special pens that Mrs Fergus got from America. I named mine Midnight Owl

What I would change - Try not to smudge the pen around on the rock.

Other comments - I am proud that I got first place and that I got it finished.